Video with spark

[Jeff Belben]

Im looking for some criticism on my video. be brutally honest and please tell me how i can improve. keep in mind it was super windy up there.

Thanks guys!

 

[Robert]

Pretty good horizontal motion very smooth. Minor things, music is a bit dull but that's a personal thing. Maybe change up the transition animations they repeat allot. Another thing is try angling the camera down just a little bit for the forward shots, a little less sky and a little more of the ground. Other than that great, no jerky movements or other amatuer stuff you usually see